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NEW DAWN (Jan. contest)

Cold winter rain assails my home.
I pay it little heed
as through the past I slowly roam
causing my soul to bleed.

For the past is flush with those
who are now behind that final door,
a time when I wore smaller clothes
when I gave no thought to nevermore.

And the rain pounds on and on
while those ghosts float through my mind
as the time approaches dawn
with peace of mind being hard to find.

Maybe because just yesterday
I stood in a crowd beside a hole
where one more friend from a past day
would soon rest deeper than a mole.

Then my phone begins to chime.
A buddy asks for my day's plan
which crumbles the past's accrued rime
just when daylight comes around again.

Break of dawn and making a plan
with a friend at last brings me a smile
bringing joy to this old fat man
for at least a little while.

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Structured: Western
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kick it of well Jan is very cold here wait towards the end my mind may steer else take the lead I plead mny won't in the snow read play the harp and drink wine maybe whiskey life yesterday was no misery now it is as we see a history yesterday we loll'd now add another R... rflol may be stan judge the jan poetry and keep happy save dollar 20 you so far never gave me poemise this perhaps I may as my fingers about the laps top play now only upon my laps play wow it's mighty cold today gloves can't me betray have a good wintry day stan today cheers let jess say we may compose another one another day It's snowing here today

here where a 3 inch snow snarls traffic lol.......stan

author comment

yeah normal minus 23 degrees
goes down to minus 37 ...for small whiles
Jess has already kicked me
read my poem pl

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