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never ever say die ...nor quit live it

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2017-04-25 09:54

Many times
I was forced to quit
but since more than many read me
I stuck to my pit

Hence today
six decades away
I spell poetry
rhyme or not forget it
many still read me

On another site
by the week end
4,00.000 reviews
of my poetry
will all see
a
MARK!!!

Thanks for visiting
my silly profile
I want all to make
their own decisions
all their living while
in their own inimitable style....

Regardless!!!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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wesley snow

Tue, 2017-04-25 18:50

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Thanks for the English that I may follow you on your path, but I don't know if I'd call it poetry. A little too free in it's free verse.

W. H. Snow

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lovedly

Tue, 2017-04-25 21:59

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let's then
abandon it.......
too loose
to be
so free
I must abide with thee
till I can produce
thumping Poetry
in which my poet masters
gems can see

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