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Never-ending Story

Blossomed daffodils
gracing windowsills
bluebells bloom
lighting the gloom
fields of green
lush and serene
silver birch trees
whistling in the breeze
natures glory
never-ending story

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Natures story
never-ending glory

just another way those two lines could go nice nature poem Sue

Jayne-Chloe xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

thanks glad you enjoyed this little one x

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