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the neopoet he!

we wish you well
pain can be overcome
by composing poetry
as you do friend
i only hold your morale high up
upon the bamboo tree
some day
one day
we all have to go

why bamboo ?
ask me
its straight and unbreakable
like thee
so be happy
like me
I died in 1977
came alive
just to read your indelible poetry
my mind has so been branded
thy poetry

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Free verse
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I wonder who's this poem is written for, but it doesn't really matter. I liked the idea of the bamboo. I thought it's really a clever choice.
Thanks for sharing.


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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