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Necrophil...

Necrophil for that dead-end feeling!
Does your husband love the feeling of cold skin?
Do you want to feel like a corpse?
Take Necrophil!

It slows your heart and puts you in a trance
take two tablets and a cold shower
by the time you're ready
your husband will be HOT!

Necrophil is the latest trend
Of course you want to be the best fantasy you can be!
Does your husband get the cold shoulder from you?
Does he like it?

Try Necrophil now!

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I wrote this after seeing a documentary about all the drugs we take for our ills. ~ Geezer. .
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roaming corpse
they are as it is
a chance you give

this is for youngsters only, us older folk are too close to the edge as it is. We might not come back from a dose of Necrophil!
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

author comment

you should go into advertising, you'll make a bundle! those kids will go for just about anything new. big bucks await you!

*hugs, Cat

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