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Nature and Him
YOU LOVE nature
more than you do a woman
yet I am glad
you they summon,
to enjoy the bountiness,
the glory
the fiery story
composed by Almighty
He hasn't wasted a time life
in eternity
creating
destroying
recreating humanity
along with it naturality
and
as you call it poetry
I say tis a mystery....
why man runs after
power and money
the use of which is just limited
yet leaves the world of nature unexposed
in dreams distant I suppose....
perhaps he may stumble at the most
seeking solace at the altar of salvation
will he be by then
A ghost!
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emeka ozurumba
Tue, 2014-04-29 14:50
very rhythmic balance and i
very rhythmic balance and i loved, your model of conveyance impeccable the theme
emeka ozurumba
Tue, 2014-04-29 14:54
dear loved
pls can we get to our seminar forum where we are to write a joint poem , please can you choose a topic and write your version, then when i write mine together we will edit it , time is of essence
loved
Tue, 2014-04-29 22:31
THANKS
let me know
what you want me to write about
I am an off the cuff poet
knowing only free verses
no poetic nuances
by now all know my uniquity
you too now do
ask raj or Ian
or Stan
loved
author commentalidzain
Tue, 2014-04-29 21:40
loved
Man seeks power and money
for reasons that vary
many are greedy for self-consumption
believing they promote their ascendance
others want them to aid others
to paint life in meaningful colours
but you and i know, my friend
none of them will last
if only they return to nature
i believed they will be happier
for it will teach them Balance
peace and harmony in abundance
it will tell them that we need one another
to create a beautiful future
Alid