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Name Invader

On the walls
On the cars
On the bricks
On the trucks
And on the trains
You invade
In imagination
You participate
Making a summary of society
With retrospective theory
Achieving freedom with notoriety
Off the walls of normality
Into colorful reality
Making serendipity of what was once a blank canvas
On the walls
You create
On the minds
You invade
And it could not have been more beautiful.

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This poem is dedicated to the street artists Banksy and Space Invader. The poem is as it is. Do not try to look at it logically, but rather emotionally. How does this poem make you feel about creativity?
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loved it. however, i got a dedication to all graffitists out of this one. it doesn't really seem to specify. the title led me in the direction that unsolicited grafiti art invaded our imaginations and society (alot of graffiti i usually see is of the artists name), rather than shouted out to Space Invader.
but it was damn good anyways.
keep 'em coming, plz

Yeah I know what you mean. I dedicated it to Space Invader and Banksy because they are one of the biggest players in the street art world. The poem itself is dedicated to all street art. However after doing some research, the two I chose really stood out too me because of how they stood out from the others. Either way, thanks for reading the poem!

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