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Mysterious Cat

Across from me I see a cat,
I note her pattern and design;
I marvel how her body flows
In beautiful authentic rhyme.

I watch intently her movements,
I wish to know what they define;
but tense excitement cause a sound,
and eyes wheel to alight on mine!

My stare is captured in her pull
In her wide penetrating eyes,
And strange -her power holds me there
Until her thoughts are satisfied.

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I got the scene clearly and the thoughts that might flit through one's mind as looking at a cat in motion. You captured the pull of a cat's eyes as they regard you and measure your intent. Very nice!
~ Geezer.
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"You captured the pull of a cat's eyes as they regard you and measure your intent"
thank you, you saw the main point of the moon.

T

The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight

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read lovedly
in new garb as
lovedone
transformation
tyro

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