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My Song

You are buried
Buried, deep within my soul
Where the rain can't touch you
Nor can the magnificent lightning show
That strikes in the worst of thunderstorms

I’ll protect you come what may
No one can harm you
Silence being my pledge to thee
Until you are ready to listen

This, my love
I can forever promise
And when, you are ready
I shall set you free
So you can fly fiercely
Into the sweet melody
That is...

My Song.

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A perfect prayer to your 'Love' My favorite line, " Silence being my pledge to thee, until you are ready to listen." ~ Geez.
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My heart is in a flutter. You are my muse sir. Do not tell a soul.

Thank you...Teddy

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Well, you see I wrote this today, and I'm not quite sure yet of the theme the words just came like this. I like your thoughts though. Maybe it's just simply a song that one day I should need to write ? Maybe it is my heart? Thank you for your thoughts Sir.

Thank you...Teddy

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Hello (after a few hours sleep)
A sweet poem and I wonder would it truly be my song or our song?
Anyhow a pleasure for a first read this morning from across the waters.

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That's a great point and if I was to change my to our it could also work, however this is not a romantic poem to someone, I think if anything what is within me is a musical note, does that make more sense? Like I said it's brand new and I really like the thoughts of my dear, friends here. So thank you. Maybe some day I may be famous for writing the saddest love song of all.

Thank you...Teddy

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The saddest love song of all?..I dunno if you are capable of that. Sad songs say so much ..~E.J.~

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you do hold me in some type of sun bubble don't you (most grateful)
i guess if i ever do write it, we will sit together and drink a beer, then i'll say see i told you so.

Thank you...Teddy

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That would be nice Teehee,

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All I can say is that it's so beautiful. So perfect.

Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.

i am very happy with that i'll take it. Have a wonderful Sunday and St Valentines.

Thank you...Teddy

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