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My Salutations To Neopoets All Of You
My Salutations To Neopoets All Of You
I Salute You All
I shall return once the tears
From my eyes dry,
You know why
Now I cry.
As I read your wonderful page,
I thought of myself as a sage,
Still turning in ones grave,
Seeking knowledge
From the darkened valleys,
Crevices and alleys of time,
Fathomed below the seas
Of knowledge of humanity,
But as I was about
To close your chapter,
My eye caught my own profile.
That you estimate me,
To such an extent,
Is what made me cry.
Wait I shall return,
Upon times vehicle,
To come to salute you,
Bigpapadan,
The world simply adores you.
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Comments
mona
Thu, 2011-01-13 13:16
And so we do
. Come on Loved.
I love this one, it looks not that sad poem ,but sarcasm of the situation ,as I said before :Take your time to think about a subject and try to concentrate ,let us feel each word you write .....k
Mona Rose
loved
Thu, 2011-01-13 22:38
you confuse me
did u like it
or are u being sarcastic
which????
loved
mona
Fri, 2011-01-14 01:18
I like it, and your poem looks like ...........................
I like it, and your poem is not sad poem. To me your writing was sarcasm from a situation+ little sadness
Mona Rose
loved
Sat, 2011-01-15 17:03
THANKS
GLAD FOR UR JOINING ME IN CRYING
AND ENJOYING
SIMULTANEOUSLY
loved