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My Rosy Lover ed

These roses speak of truth
love starts from early youth
till it exposes the real truth
as it buds...
within you

this is love
as this lovely happy couple
speak only of love
as they dance
you can see above

oh what is love
so many ask of me

tis it... tis it... tis love

smile and dance like these two
then you will realise
what true love is
it tastes better than honey
where is the question of money
tis love
tis it
my Love!
Dear loved

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Free verse
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trim the thorns and its lovelier
but some will say without the pain of sacrifice,
it will be soo much duller
as if it lacks colour
love is sweeter than honey
more valuable than money
more lasting than wealth
as it contributes good health
oh love is
just lovely


lovely roses for u

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