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My Nose

Submitted by Mark on Sun, 2020-08-23 22:32

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
And not like a hose,
Not my nose!

My nose breathes in
My nose breathes out
It’s on my face
Mommy calls it a snout.

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
It’s not like my ears
Ask anyone . . . everybody knows!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
haha a children's poem from my book.
Editing stage: 
Not actively editing
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Teddy15

Mon, 2020-08-24 02:38

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Awe That's gorgeous Mark. Such playfulness in this, snout is a fun word. This is most endearing.

Thank you...Teddy

Mark

Mon, 2020-08-24 08:16

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::smiles::

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Geezer

Mon, 2020-08-24 08:41

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This comment is not a bad thing, but it sounds like something a child would recite in school. Something that they would delight in. It instantly brought back to me, reading things of the kind to my boys when they were young. I love the simplicity and the fun it brings.It was the first thing I read this morning with my breakfast and gave me a terriffic start to my day. Thanks. ~ Gee.
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c lynn brooks

Mon, 2020-08-24 17:05

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oh my good man what in the bloody hell have you been smoking ? hey share
what ever prompted this little ,poem
remnants o Dr. Seus perhaps

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Tue, 2020-08-25 11:52

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Only the good or pure shit hahaha
Wow! Mr. Seuss what a compliment!
Thanks!
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Geezer

Tue, 2020-08-25 08:51

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Read the last word! LoL
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Mark

Tue, 2020-08-25 11:44

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Cute huh?

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Lavender

Tue, 2020-08-25 13:51

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Hi, Mark,
I'll join in on the accolades to this one! I really enjoy children's poetry, Shel Silverstein is a favorite. I think children's poetry is especially hard to write - it has to be so inviting and fun, but also somewhat worthy of the read! I really like this!
Thank you!
L

Mark

Tue, 2020-08-25 18:20

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It is only one of two that I have managed to write over the years.
Pleased to have you comment,
Mark

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