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My Nose

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
And not like a hose,
Not my nose!

My nose breathes in
My nose breathes out
It’s on my face
Mommy calls it a snout.

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
It’s not like my ears
Ask anyone . . . everybody knows!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
haha a children's poem from my book.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

::smiles::

Mark

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This comment is not a bad thing, but it sounds like something a child would recite in school. Something that they would delight in. It instantly brought back to me, reading things of the kind to my boys when they were young. I love the simplicity and the fun it brings.It was the first thing I read this morning with my breakfast and gave me a terriffic start to my day. Thanks. ~ Gee.
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oh my good man what in the bloody hell have you been smoking ? hey share
what ever prompted this little ,poem
remnants o Dr. Seus perhaps

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Only the good or pure shit hahaha
Wow! Mr. Seuss what a compliment!
Thanks!
Mark

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Read the last word! LoL
~ Gee.
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Cute huh?

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If you take the time to read a poem then take the time to let the author know you were there. Study it and form an opinion as well, even if it means going back to it more than once. That is basic critique, what Neopoet is all about.

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Hi, Mark,
I'll join in on the accolades to this one! I really enjoy children's poetry, Shel Silverstein is a favorite. I think children's poetry is especially hard to write - it has to be so inviting and fun, but also somewhat worthy of the read! I really like this!
Thank you!
L

It is only one of two that I have managed to write over the years.
Pleased to have you comment,
Mark

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If you take the time to read a poem then take the time to let the author know you were there. Study it and form an opinion as well, even if it means going back to it more than once. That is basic critique, what Neopoet is all about.

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