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My Nose

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
And not like a hose,
Not my nose!

My nose breathes in
My nose breathes out
It’s on my face
Mommy calls it a snout.

I like my nose
It’s not like my toes
It’s not like my ears
Ask anyone . . . everybody knows!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
haha a children's poem from my book.
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Awe That's gorgeous Mark. Such playfulness in this, snout is a fun word. This is most endearing.

Thank you...Teddy

::smiles::

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This comment is not a bad thing, but it sounds like something a child would recite in school. Something that they would delight in. It instantly brought back to me, reading things of the kind to my boys when they were young. I love the simplicity and the fun it brings.It was the first thing I read this morning with my breakfast and gave me a terriffic start to my day. Thanks. ~ Gee.
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oh my good man what in the bloody hell have you been smoking ? hey share
what ever prompted this little ,poem
remnants o Dr. Seus perhaps

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Only the good or pure shit hahaha
Wow! Mr. Seuss what a compliment!
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Read the last word! LoL
~ Gee.
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Cute huh?

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Hi, Mark,
I'll join in on the accolades to this one! I really enjoy children's poetry, Shel Silverstein is a favorite. I think children's poetry is especially hard to write - it has to be so inviting and fun, but also somewhat worthy of the read! I really like this!
Thank you!
L

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