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My name is K Elly

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2015-11-13 16:01

My name is K Elly

You like writing long stories
I like making em tall
so as you are now in Sydney
an Aussie Joshy is friendly with me
I have never met him
he is tall and a blonde...
cutey and a lovely beauty

go befriend him
he is young like you
and his name is Joshy too
convert him from gayism
will you?
to be a handsome guy
rich like or along with you..

You are a lovely gal I know
from a place
where another of my pal comes also

but he is married
stays away from his wife
she is old
and he is sexually still so bold
can't even now his withhold

help him too would you
as chains of hotels have you
and
so i will also meet you
as your free guest
will you accept me?
I wonder

but would you
I’d love to hear
from the horse's mouth
have you?

My name is K Elly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Sparrow

Tue, 2015-11-17 19:33

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Don't despair if age has caught you unaware.
As I have just written that the days,
here from being young to this old age,
was maybe a dream.
These times as we age and memory fades
Run from one year to the next
There is no past, present, or future, yet we are.
Here in this Now we exist it is a fleeting thing.
As our structure later will make things clear.
A spirit that can dwell in a place,
Just there, don't you see, or is it over there.
As an electron we know that it exists
Yet can we know where it is in our now,
Go well young Bard keep writing,
It will catch me in one of my Nows.
Yours, Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Wed, 2015-11-18 03:27

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But you all will never realize
this poet is dying
since many years

my words keep him alive
he is one of my masters
and the world's best

I only give him hope to live
and
his acumen display
he is the poet of the day

stricken but not given in yet
my words are like medicine
they comfort human.....
amen!

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