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MY MEMORABLE BEST POEM ....2015 AD

Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last

all else does rust

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

this is marvelous! thank you for sharing it with us!

*warm hugs, Cat

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so many outstanding POETS liked this poem
then I was like OUT STANDING
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THANKS

author comment

Apt but with full message.

"Poetic license
gives
the poets
the free will to
embroider a good tale
and deviate from the established rules of language"~Jackweb

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