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My Love to Sir!

The fact that
the poetic acumen
I have or had,
has been milked
by none less than Jess....
I must confess

else I would have
gone away
In the midst of snowy forests to stay
and
from such lovely poets
kept away.

But the very fact
you read me
kick me
and
love me

''I love it too ''

Except , when you abuse
then alone I accuse
that's not my muse

don't take me amiss
Loved is loved
only because of Neopoets
extraordinary like you…

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But thank you, I think.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

what milk can one expect,
but a drop ,
as we do
when guys are young ,
or
when we all have life's loving game begun
so have fun
order goats milk
if you have been done...

loved

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"Australian Elf's head Swells"

In Sydney today an Elf of the cat loving variety, fell off off his toads tool.
This left the toad with a big grin on his face.
The toad now resides in Queensland in the cane fields, where he uses his tool to great advantage.
They say the reason for the Elfs fall was that his head had swelled.
We all know that Elves are little persons, and if their heads should swell, they become unbalanced and fall all over the place.
A specialist unit of "S" Elf preservation has been sent to his residence.
The latest bulletin is that the Elf is nowhere near himself, but is on the mend.
He is now on the top of a concave topped mushroom.
So all of you that love this little critter, please don't worry he can't fall off of this one.
There is a question as to his frame of mind, as he has been talking about milking, one of our loved poets, this is being investigated and a full report will follow,
S.A.D'ness

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

are you calling me a frog-fucker?
I have been known to lick them for the hallucinogenic properties, but it was entirely consensual I'll have you know!
[grins]

Glad to have the Specialist Elf Preservation unit on hand though, good to see the team is diligent, we are an endangered species.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Liked your praise of the great Elf, he now knows that two of us love him, lol,
But please just the odd Senryu next time, it has turned his world upside down, ROTFLMAO.. Du Du.
Still Love you all, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

and now also I am

loved

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