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my knew friend

I have this knew and reel good friend
he's come too help me with my rights
my poems and my prose, shortly
will aspirate too grater heights

I now know longer kneed worry
if weather I have spilt things write

I can rely on my knew friend
to watch four me four for spilling slights
sew now my talent will a crew
and I'll right stuff of pure delights

with not a care I might mis-do
(and know kneed now four dumb re-rights).

ewe sea, with this knew reel good friend
I feel it's like I've hit bingo
In future rites, with nil ado
accomplished spilling will jest glow

And this won is just prefect two -
my new spill chick, he toll me sew
,

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You'v reelly improved deer judy. Congts. on having this knew friend.
Mutch fun indeed...Hahaha.
( such a funny poem needs a bit of fun comment)

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A fun write I wonder what school of thought this came from, and did they only teach arithmetic lol.
Loved it, I think there are a few right mistakes you must pay more attention lol,
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I have a suggestion however.

I have this knew and reel good friend.
I think "knew" should be "new" and "reel" should be spelled "real".

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Get into the spirit of the poem. She purposely misused these words and others just for laughs lol,,,,,,stan

just a bit of fun. Glad you enjoyed it.
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

Typo hear typo their typos evry bloodi whear,yoor new friends hopeles.. LOL Nice one Love Roscoe. PS does he hier hymself oot.

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

TYPOS ??
OH KNOW !!!
WEAR?

well I won't heir out my knew friend two yew Roscoe
lol - ewe can have him - four nothing

Thanks for the visit - glad you enjoyed this
love judy
Axxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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This had me in splits. Next time I need to check my dicktion, I will check it out with you :)

still laughing at your "Spelltoons"...i guess that would have made a good title..

raj (sublime_ocean)

You'll be sure to make no mistakes then :)
lol - 'dicktion' - love it
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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Brava. Well done!!!

joe

Thank you very much
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

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know
and i used to say you know
that i know
glad his thwinn has been rhebarn
in thoue paoetyry
and phrom knew and knowne
bhill bhee bharn nhewrer pieotic khids
ask youaer knewh
if heeee'ddd marrhie my
uuuknow khid
joodddeeeee!!!!!!

The mis-spelling still needs to be passed by the spell check...
Thanks for the visit
Love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

author comment

mouth filling with mangoes
you have in Aussie too
and words come corrupted u r knew friend always knew
my friend
u know kind
also
now
how bout reading
mine two still
born still!
neopoets will one day me kill!

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