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my face is my fortune-------------- hidden!

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2014-09-22 14:20

those who post others snaps
and try to get away
can be charged
for impersonation
by the way

so stay away
don't show your face
be flowery as I am
the best I can show of
what I am
a PERFUMED
flower
a thing of joy
FRAGRANCE
for all living and dead
gal or guy
to enjoy

all ahoy
only request I ever make
of ALL thee
read my poetry
once for all!
then say
after all!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

raj

Mon, 2014-09-22 16:53

From the first lines of your poem, I guess you have reason to believe that there are some who post other's photos as their profile pic. If so, that is wrong. However being a poetry workshop, I believe the poetry is the focus of attention more than the picture. Having said that, the picture serves the purpose of connecting with the person who has posted the poem.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

lovedly

Mon, 2014-09-22 19:57

lovedly's picture

and see all ur/////that side folks have corrupted it
fb is Western culture... unknown people
but facially correct
sad the Easterners have tainted it

so I compose poetry
as a flower of fragrance and perfumed emotions
thanks for your visit
the colour of trees is changing

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