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My Elysian Song

I like when we live in a halcyon space,
where but understanding is persistence,
where loving hearts are what we all embrace,
then no evil powers are in existence.

I like when we don't pass the hatred speech,
then only caring messages prevail,
when the unreachable hearts can be reached,
and through solace seas soul_boats have to sail.

So, the peace buds burgeon, and are a bloom.
while hate in cradle dies, with its cousin, gloom.

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A lovely write short and exact, very meaningful I wish more would read and understand about Love and hate.
Yours as always.
Ian xx

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

dear Ian.
Thank you for the kind visit and the words of buttress.
Highly appreciated.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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a nice poem with a great comparison between love and hate and how to deal with it.... some great lines too

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raj (sublime_ocean)

Always a pleasure to have your lovely visit.
I'm happy to know that you liked it.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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