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Mummy I'm Springing -- FEB CONTEST

Early bud of Spring
now does from inside spring
from winter's womb
rather a bit too soon

the normal period
is by nature forgotten
see even nature has its way
can't all humans really sway

the leaves one can't betray
lifeless ones have flown away
before the long winter
now sprouts in semi cold wind
the beauty of flowers
within sheets of glossy
melting glistening snow

the flower light yellow
baby birds in colourful feathers
also have unearthed
unknowingly from where
even nature doesn't know

O woman like early spring
you have sprung from within
the cooling inner folds
now it is nor warm neither cold
kids also on swings
in simmering early spring
shiver yet still swing

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
no words I am still shivering in Canada it's still snowing
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I liked your twist on becoming aware of the seasonal change..
Great write I am not sure if I should enter I hate being first all the time
I have had loads of cruises and am now near a millionaire with the odd Arrow head thrown in. lol
Take care, see you in battle , Yours as always Ian

Words can build a nation

Glad u came by
none else do read us now
oldies we two
stand by

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enter contests are just for Fun
do you remember

my Fun poem won
THIRD in a row of poetic


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