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Mother Earth
Untamed maiden of the mountains,
You soar with golden eagles,
No malice has ensnared you,
As you roam in harmonious joy,
Dancing to the enchanting call of morning birds,
The mischievous wind your playful friend,
All the while from daunting heights,
You welcome the vastness before you,
Your essence enticed forth,
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Wed, 2022-08-03 09:27
Hello Wolff!
Very descriptive piece! I love the metaphor used in the title. This is a laudatory epithet!
Beautiful work!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
C. Wolff
Wed, 2022-08-03 10:14
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2022-08-04 06:20
Stunning
Again a beautifully written poem. Really impressive.
My fav:
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
Super job,
Tim
C. Wolff
Thu, 2022-08-04 08:40
Thank you!!
Thank you!!
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-08-04 07:52
dear C. Wolff,
soon the seasons will change again, as Mother Gaia turns the green leaves to vibrant colors. she reminds us of her powers... excellent write!
*hugs, Cat
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C. Wolff
Thu, 2022-08-04 08:41
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-08-04 18:09
Fantastic
Beautiful imagery wrapped in your immense love of nature and all that goes with it. I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.
~RoseBlack~
C. Wolff
Thu, 2022-08-04 20:28
Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much!!