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Morning Walk [Sunku WS]

Gentle
caress on
naked soles

Lilies
necking with
ecstatic sighs

Laughter
astounds in
Springfield wilds

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a clever play with words here raj.
If I am not wrong this tells much about the beauty of nature. Please correct me if I'm wrong.

Regards

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You are spot on Rula. The give away is in the last two words :) Thanks for being a rare visitor to my posts...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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a great pleasure dear raj!
You are a so talented poet. I read you not only to enjoy but also to learn.
Thank you!

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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thanks from my heart Rula for your kind words...

I do likewise with your posts too and almost always there are some good take aways...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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yeah following since last millenia
yet I am unable to learn
and
poetry like you raj
churn
when will my mind burn
hopefully in its own turn

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