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Moon chase
What's on the other side of moon
a thought that keeps
blinking, lurking, gnawing
on my radar
tracking her ballet steps
leaving dotted lines
on my clouded mind
she keeps
haunting, flirting, beaming
with a "fetch me if you can"
teasing smile
never turning her back on me
she even eludes my spy cam
leaving me a hapless victim
of eve teasing
from light years away
sentenced to
serving time on earth
bewitched
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Eumolpus
Fri, 2018-09-07 17:43
nice poem raj
gets the job done.
I think we a were all awestruck in the first moon landing, one guy was left in the shuttle going around the dark side of the moon, out of touch, and as he said, blasting Beethoven.
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Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings
raj
Sat, 2018-09-08 05:51
Thanks Eumolpus
for taking time to visit this page and leave an approving comment...means a lot....
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentRula
Fri, 2018-09-07 17:44
Hello raj
I wonder if the she is the real moon or a real she!
I know it's a silly question, just a teasing question from eve :)
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raj
Sat, 2018-09-08 05:53
Liked your comment Rula..
Liked your comment Rula...rather your questioning comment )
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raj (sublime_ocean)
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