Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Mood Swing
tumultuous waves writhe
sweeping away garbage to sea shores
for life within to sustain in the mother liquor
sun eases her womb bursting with fresh brine
letting out steam to soothe her turmoil
turning buoyant crimson clouds grey
stolen of moonwalk they let loose their temper
reigning havoc with thunderous livid bolts
cool winds rush to ease burden of their anguish
the sky is blue again for birds to fly
paper boats ready to sail on a voyage
barbecues crackle with aromatic laughter
goosebumps sprout on thirsty fields
the crossword is solved,
time to turn the page
p e n d u l u m ~|~ m u l u d n e p
fits in row 1 of blank spaces
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Last few words:
Requesting opinion of readers :- Would it be good to do away with the concluding quatrain?
Editing stage:
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.
Comments
lovedly
Fri, 2018-06-15 15:22
raj
beautiful mood swinging
lovely poetry
I am on a swing too
will you switch ur mood and read me may u
you haven't read since ages
thnx
raj
Fri, 2018-06-15 15:32
Hi Lovedly
good to know this was a mood swinger for you....thanks for the read...
............................................................................................................
raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Fri, 2018-06-15 16:06
tnx
good nite