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Model Mavericks:

Ingenuity
Benefits humanity
For posterity

Last few words: 
Idealists, Ideas, Inventors, Inventions, Intellectuals, Insights
Editing stage: 

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I agree!!!

always, Cat

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If I understand your critiques correctly, it seems the drama is lost in the panorama.

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