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Missing those nights
when out were all lights
perhaps dimmed
to see your silhouette on purpose
the shining smooth silk of cashmere
Oh my dear
twas those nights
like honeymoon
despite the fact
there was no moon
your lips brushed mine
well should I once again
with divine
rhyme
but all the same
my hands slowly went low
down below
the bell rang
and you sprang
the end
a long period!
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Free verse
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Comments
alidzain
Fri, 2014-08-01 15:56
hi loved
I think honeymoon is supposed to be one word, dear. The beginning is packed with imagery, then the stanza -
but all the same
my hands slowly went low
down below
made me ask forgiveness from God for the naughty thoughts I have. lol. then the end is a relief. After that sex poem our Jayne has written awhile ago, I don't think I can handle another without feeling like a pervert. lol . So thank you for sharing.
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2014-08-01 16:25
sex is no perversion
sex is no perversion
have no guilt nor aversion tell me which human god came without doing the same Lets leave em behind and cherish our sexual minds we all love it and so did they how else could we have come this pathway because there is no other way have a re-look in the mirror and say without the appendages could you have come through that narrow pathway the passage made for humanity and there is no shame nor vanity tis the only minds divinity we all are the sacred's affinity from here to eternity...... have no doubt the time of passage of life will forever remain unchanged ...
alidzain
Fri, 2014-08-01 16:50
I'm thinking, loved
that your comments will look better with punctuation. lol.
Well, I'm curious. You say sex is not perversion. Then how do you define perversion?
Alid
lovedly
Fri, 2014-08-01 17:19
all is in ones' mind
i compose u punctuate
u think sex is....
my what can I say ???
Ian.T
Fri, 2014-08-01 19:18
Alid
Perversion is the aversion to sexual diversion
Preserving is the Status Quo, Not U2,
Who am I to deny, that the Rolling stones will gather no moss not even a Kate, Just playing,
Have fun all, Yours Sparrow.
PS:- Ian.T is sleeping, I have to go hunting a Cock Robin LOL, Yes said Batman Come fly with me, as I am old fashioned.
Night All! rotflmao..
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..