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Mis-taken Identity

Submitted by Triskelion on Sun, 2023-04-16 12:31

Creative people
seldom
lately
rise
to
challenge greatness,
but pursue.

"Some" (like you), find attention
in lowering
the bar.

>Thomas<

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Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Lavender

Sun, 2023-07-09 12:52