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Mis-taken Identity

Creative people
challenge greatness,
but pursue.

"Some" (like you), find attention
in lowering
the bar.


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Hello, Thomas,
So well written, I feel the prick of the pin!

..short rant on people that find their popularity in the arts by means other than genuine talent. Not directed at anyone in particular.
Thanks for reading!


. like my lost dreams...the flood

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