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mirrror me mirror

A mirror simply reflects ...
the surface
depth is measured by ones eye
don't feel shy
we all are worthy creatures of nature ...
we only mirror

feel the essence of the individual,
are only silent observers,
this is what anyone can tell

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Free verse
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Perhaps one day they'll figure out how to make a mirror that reveals what's inside. I think you might want to work on your last line a bit more...seems disconnected to me...........stan

Stan ...
thanks for your kindness
and I have reviewed


author comment

If only we could find the perfect Mirror.
Then there would be no more problems, if all could see the real self.
A good write young Bard, Take care,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

And my mirror too
when you traverse my page
I walk besides u....


author comment

For some reasons, this piece reminds me of a Malay saying which, if translated in English ,will be "look at yourself in the mirror before you condemn other's shortcomings". Anyway, its a lovely piece .Good job. ;D


i dont know....what it is....
the look important

within i know little of
and of warmth i give
the rare moments

this gives me hope
thank you

gives me more hope to compose
as you then share your warmth
with a simplistic poet like me


author comment

Aye, the eye perceives more than a mirror can candidly render, such that others might see in us an esoterically deeper being than what we might observe in ourselves.




but thanks for saying tis lovely


author comment

we can see the flicker within
if we are using sight as a guide
our voices recorded hear let us
speak....our words
let us feel...

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