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milt what!

as we swim in the vastness of the universe supreme
we are an extension of milt …
it so does seem

well for those who want to know
what is milt …
some say
Google it....

well...

it’s the sperm of male fish
spread across the waters
female fish come to bathe in it freely
when some enters..

human beings are also
extensions of fish like existence
so be it some like, fish,
swim along the current
mostly few like electric eel and me
against..

time shears either…
sooner than later
all finely burst or float …
at the rivers delta
till they are enveloped
by surfs thereafter

so time has come perhaps for me,
to merge with eternity …
the sea, let’s me float for a while..
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I don’t care about rhyme or curve
with love
emotion
sympathy and empathy

the worldly relations do serve …

I shall await for thee
well many don’t like this word..
archaic perhaps

today tis
hi and bye
till then let me smile
and lie…

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I have answered this in PM but just would like to know where this is going it seems to be floating as the milt, it needs grounding a little, and let the reader look up Milt as it is good for them to use their dictionaries..
Take care young Bard may talk to you later, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

want milk placed in a glass
what of milt Ian
shall let them taste for free early.
hopefully...
read the behind the verse meaning too...

loved

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want milk placed in a glass
what of milt Ian
shall let them taste for free early.
hopefully...
read the behind the verse meaning too...

loved

author comment
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