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Milky white sail

Soft bright
milky white
sail please
guide me
across
The silvery
sea. To
The illustrious
Land that is
hidden away
from the malice
palace of mankind
That we know today.
the vivacious
Lucious land
Of fantasy.

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Hello, Edward,
What a gentle, pleasing flow of poetry! Dream-like. I was hoping it would be real, not a fantasy after all.
Happy New Year!
L

Well in the realms of reality nothing can indulge itself into the pleasurable paint of perfection forever .
Everything that we know of has a flaw.

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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was hoping to find that it was not a fantasy. I don't think that there is anywhere that is as you describe. But as long as we have that fantasy and wish for this utopia, we may yet find it. So very pleasing and smooth. ~ Geez.
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I for days was in writers block so what helps bring an idea in my head is music I personally like old music like Frank Sinatra Danny Kaye dean Martin Sammy Davis jr. and I came up with this while listening to Don Giovanni

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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I have sailed away into a fantasy for sure reading this. Happy New Year, young Man. X

Thank you...Teddy

And a happy new year to you to

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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As Lavender said, this is a beautiful flow of poetry, elegant and dreamy. I enjoyed reading it! Happy New Year! :D

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Thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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