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Mended in art

Submitted by Edward nigma on Wed, 2023-02-08 20:27

The man who
hides his heedful
heart within
the sanguine
seams of his
solemn art.

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Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Wed, 2023-02-08 21:23

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Hello, Friend,
You are a wise young man, and a devoted, amazing poet.
Thank you for this.
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Edward nigma

Wed, 2023-02-08 22:52

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I was inspired by these three things
https://youtu.be/0fIKitANoB4
https://youtu.be/ducG55pfCMQ
https://youtu.be/ghoHUbfIgPU
It gave me the image of a person whose heart and himself is only fully understood through his art.

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-02-09 06:39

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Wonderful inspirations.
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Rosewood Apothecary

Thu, 2023-02-09 06:02

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Very well done young man. This one is standout. In theme, language and execution. Short. Focused. Coherent truth.

Tim

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