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memories only live

Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last

all else does rust

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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And we become prisoners of our memories - especially the bad unresolved ones. We live and relive them as though nothing has changed. This piece touhed something very deep within.

Cheers ... Leonard

Leonard Daranjo

"When the waiting stops, the living begins"

Leonard for ur maiden visit and comment
grateful

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This is one of your best works that I have read in a while! Short and sweet! No convoluted meanings and perfectly understandable. Marvelous! ~ Gee

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As others before me have commented, this is one of your better ones, though I feel you can work some more on this to make it flow easily on tongue...just my opinion...i wish i could suggest how..

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raj (sublime_ocean)

your Blessings were needed
this one fetched
a gold for me =5 stars

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Subtle, yet I understood it.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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on another site
they gave me
A GOLD==5 stars for this one
thanks

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Yes I agree - this is one of your best. :) it's easy to understand and easy to relate too.

Beautiful in it's simplicity.

Love Mand xxx

all kind minds think alike

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Loved are you Joe ? I am confuzzled ... damn good poem though whomever wrote it !!

love Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

I am old Loved now technically Lovedly
coz of computer failure only

thanks many have liked it
awaiting Judy

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Lovedly was Loved
Sparrow was Ian.T
We still love you just the same your new
Papa xx

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No waffle, one of your best
I knew you could do it :)
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

but you took so long to read this
In a competition elsewhere
I got a Gold=5 Stars for this.
Thanks to your teaching
of slitting all waffle
regards

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You took too long to read my poetry
which won a gold =5 star
in some competition
Thanks to you
No waffle this!
Judie Regards

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As all the other poets, a great little write.
Told you that you are OK when you put your mind to it,
Yours Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

sparrowe ianed

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