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MEMORIES
Memories are simple memoirs
at the back of our mind stored
not permanent till read
but
some feel immensely dead
when they learn
coz of dementia
memoirs are no more
the world moves on
yet none is sure
What lay in those memoirs
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
No poet ever knows what one said was worthy enough though
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Thu, 2022-05-05 10:09
So True
I believe this lines:
Memories are simple memoirs
at the back of our mind stored
not permanent till read
but
some feel immensely dead
when they learn
coz of dementia
memoirs are no more
the world moves on
yet none is sure
What lay in those memoirs
Our capacity to hold unto the events of our lives lie on the memory bank ability. Some people cannot even remember or give account of their past life due to memory loss!
The human memory is just like the life we lived is hidden some where. Such life has never gone because if we can remember them they're still fresh and alive.
A short poem yet carries a strong point.
Nice work lovely!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-05-05 09:03
hello lovedly,
I agree with onyinyechi,.. but there are exercises for improving the memory capacities. Google: "memory exercises"
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Thu, 2022-05-05 11:48
THANKS AND GREAT
TO ALL WHO STILL HAVE A Memory Cats ma'am