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Memories

So beautifully penned
Of memories
I once wrote somewhere here
but one I shall now compose...
do not to the garbage bin of time dispose
memories are a joy forever I suppose
we live by the memory of time
long buried since
but memories are all reverie
in moments of existence
and
these returns to us
those loved ones sometimes
we call were mine..
such memories come back again
oft to our gain
but alas memories never fail in vain
they are the fruits of love
we had tasted once.

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A very pensive and well thought out write! Good title, simple and to the point. I can find no fault with your work. I liked these lines:

those loved ones sometimes
we call were mine..
such memories come back again
oft to our gain
but alas memories never fail in vain
they are the fruits of love
we had tasted once.

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
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You are always so gracious and kind ,
it energises my rife mind
and
in memories' a place for you
I will always find...

loved

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It is coming up to my memories Birthday 6/6/44 I know you will say you cant remember anything before three but I will make an exception as I remember the Aircraft as they flew over and can still see them, I was 2 years and three months old then.
This write is very good and brings to the fore those things that our mind will store as permanent markers for a good time or just because it overwhelmed the senses, great, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Scientifically...
the brain... skull portion is in a state of fixing ..within two hours of birth
when a child's brains frequency is fixed
that's why one smiles and makes a new born feel special
as he/she enters a newer environment.
FROM DARKNESS TO MADNESS!! LOL..LOL ..LOL

Then within three years of age
the skull integrates totally.

That you are and exception...
may be because you are a Gemini
and
Einstein was a Piscean
Your and his brains are exquisite...
to that extent and I marvel at you both ..
as you add on to my knowledge of
THE HUMAN MIND.

Are you referring to 1945 Hiroshima or which aircrafts over England?

Would you be kind enough to educate me too?

loved

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The aircraft I talk about of memory, are the ones that flew towing Gliders from all over the South of England on "D" Day 6/6/1944 when we threw everything at the beaches and inland a bit to regain a foothold in Europe.
The film the longest day depicts a lot of the action on that day but it is a little biased with Americans winning the war, these things grate on the British people a bit.
We had been fighting Germany from September 1939 the Battle of Britain that is often referred to happened in the following year about Aug to September of 1940 when the Royal Air Force with quite a few pilots from a few other countries stopped the German Air Force from taking control of the skies and basically winning the war. Our cities were bombed to hell and back though we gave the Germans the same treatment.
Now we go to 1941 December the Japanese destroyed most of the USA fleet in Pearl Harbour, That day the USA declared war on the Japanese and came into the war properly in Europe and other places like Africa and Asia.
You best have a look at the dates and see what we lived through before Pearl Harbour.
We would buy all our supplies ships and food from USA, this stuff took us to around the 1980's to repay hence the demise of the British Empire whatever it was as we could no longer afford to protect or service it as a going concern. Still who wants to run a world look at what it is like today????
Also while you are checking dates young Bard have a look at when the USA came into the First world war, this is also a touchy subject for a lot of the old timers here. La La, I am trying to figure a major war that the Americans won since 1945. The world has been cruel to us lol....
You take care out there, and have a great day, Yours Ian.T

PS:- I am a fiery "Aries" Ha Ha 26th March on a Thursday in 1942 what a wonderful day, but can't remember much about it, and I was so shocked at being sent to this Earth I didn't speak for at least two years...

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Mr fiery Aries ,
you add so much to my brain
the weight of it all
it can't retain
but your DOB..
interests me,
only if you add
the time of birth too
Surely you will do.

loved

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The most beautiful Hour of that day was 9-30 am GMT lol
You take care young Bard I have told you this before but maybe lost in cyber space, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

OVER 20000,yes 20000....twenty thousand individuals
wherein i have made my own stats.SCIENTIFIC Zodiac plan
You fit into it very well
if only you would like to discuss as msg
in order to retain privacy. at your discretion .

But I also assure myself
that you give no credit to my knowledge and belief

26 March 1942 LONDON 0930 GMT CORRECT?

loved

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Can't think why I was born in that England place I had specified a beautiful Island, You take care young Bard, maybe they wanted me to talk to you one day in the great plan of things, Yours Ian.T

26 March 1942 Trowbridge Wiltshire England 0930 GMT

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

We all have treasured personal memories. Indeed these are a major part of who we are. I really like this poem and it's got me to thinking about racial memories.................stan

if we all accepted
THE HUMAN RACE
as a single race.

Come in the aliens with grace
so that combined,
we as humans together .....can them trace.

loved

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if we all accepted

The Human Race
as a single race.

Come in the aliens with grace
so that combined,
we as humans together .....
can them trace.

loved

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