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Me Reborn Doggy

I am a dog lover
all my thirteen dogs
really loved me

they have all passed into oblivion
only one
now speaks my language

I beckon
if there be a second version
of human or animal
heavens send me as a dog
to some lady
she will love me
more than any lady today loves her hubby
may you also bless me

kittens are sweet
but dogs are a treat
the other day they served me
dogs meat
them I did smash
and then did beat
in my rage and heat!

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POEM OF 13 JAN 2013
oh dog!

When a tsunami comes all dogs alert human beings Let's utilize their advance knowledge at ease...
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Oh dog!
when I composed my maiden tsunami poem
I also discovered dogs
can sense things miles ahead,
so place a few on rafts out at sea
so help them to help thee
in an early warning
of the oncoming next tsunami
dogs love humans
so their sacrifice will gain importance
you will get a few seconds more
to take to your heels
God will in humans forever
love for the filial seal….

always animals help human beings
so help dogs
to love thee

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a love of dogs, but to put them on a raft out on the ocean to alert us in case of tsunami? Really?
I have eaten many things that people haven't over the years, but I too, would be incensed at being offered dog! I won't tell of some of the things that I have eaten, but I'm sure that there would be people that would be just as angry at being served them. There is no telling what people might eat and what they consider a pet or a too cute animal to eat! ~ Gee.
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much worse
some all have known to have partaken
human

Incredible beasts
well that's what say
Newspapers

still I am and will remain for ever
a DOG Lover
Gee smile please

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Killer sends his regards. ~ Gee.
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did you also read my poetry of 2013
posted as my comment herein
hope ye will Gee

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