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ME NE RICORDO [english]

Submitted by Geremia on Mon, 2016-05-09 08:58

ME NE RICORDO english

I miss them all to heart’s breaking
and sink to deepest longing.
memories are cruel recollections
and sicken a wounded soul.
I endure in this empty world alone.
‘the noise of living comes to me
In dreams only and the silence of the day
is a quiet mourning…
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jane210660

Mon, 2016-05-09 10:44

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But without them, you indeed have nothing.

Do not see their mocking smile
Live amongst them
And let faded glories
Sing their tale.
Do not weep
For what might have been,
For with mourning
Comes a new Dawn.

I do not suffer as you, but I hear you across the miles. Jx

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Geremia

Tue, 2016-05-10 08:52

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dying sucks

joe

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