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May you live long O poet!
You take me to those heights
where I could never
dream to ever fly
but for you....
you have been
my master
all know
and
a sincerest one
at that also
many read me
only b'coz you say so
hope you stay longer
ere you go
May the winds of change
bring about a change
and
let you forever
in our hearts remain
this world is a vast domain
we all know
no one for all times does remain
but we have to be sane
and
accept of what does remain
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geremia
Tue, 2016-04-19 13:20
good message for all to read.
good message for all to read. Clear and concise poetry
joe.
lovedly
Tue, 2016-04-19 15:00
thank you joe
do you know
another guy
god knows from where
has come to wring me
like a wet towel
one does on a beach
without any thing on
upon