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May I Help You

Friends in the Western world
are more valued
than relatives
many have none

An Alaska boy wrote to me
just read me
I'm awfully lonely
no birds or bees
it's snowing
teach me what are vowels
what are consonants
my English is weak

So I told him a e i o u
are five vowels
the rest are consonants

When you write about fruits
say I love to eat an (AN) apple
then say come man
a(A) kick for you
just for humor

''an and a'' did you make it

Mostly all words majorly
have a vowel
like must has a u
dish kiss miss have i's
so do as you wish ah another i
I am only trying to help you

May one day
you be blessed too
love him her or you

He sent a bunch of smiles
I cherished more than
red wine
he became a friend
no, not a lover of mine
we are miles and miles

Roses are red
he said
I have you bread
I said

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
we are born to help don't find faults teach em neos
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


glad my poem inflames smiles

author comment

We All need help and some of us need help in the writing of poetry lol. I am pleased you found another friend in this silicon forest

i had ur desire in mind.... I shall compose one on
modern needs of poetry

I have read over thousands
since last two decades
and composed many thousands
since 6 decades
you know it
All want to be read only

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