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Marriage [Runic Symbol: Gebo]
Marriage is like union of wick and wax, illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms
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Rula
Tue, 2018-08-07 13:04
Dear Raj
this is a fabulous liner about marriage. The wick, wax simile works perfectly well.
The "illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms" Wow! Can't be better expressed!!
Congrats!
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raj
Wed, 2018-08-08 16:22
Thanks Rula
for reading and your good words.
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raj (sublime_ocean)