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Marriage [Runic Symbol: Gebo]

Marriage is like union of wick and wax, illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms
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this is a fabulous liner about marriage. The wick, wax simile works perfectly well.

The "illuminating with light of love, weathering the storms" Wow! Can't be better expressed!!
Congrats!

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