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THE MARK OFCAIN

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2012-09-28 19:59

THE MARK OF CAIN

You are darkness
the serpent’s kiss
the voice that lies
and the look that shames.
You are hell’s enchantment
and you kill the light
in me.

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-09-29 04:03

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The faces of Cain, just a thought process with trigger words, just mention Cain to most people they will give you an example in their lives.
Good write there young man, Yours Ian.T

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Geremia

Sat, 2012-09-29 13:49

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Humans--somewhere between animal and angel' I guess.

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