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A Man-pleasing Dresser

She’s a man-pleasing dresser
Women’s envy does not stress her

Short and tight for her is right
Women’s lips purse tight

She’s got a bust
Show it she must
Wants a man’s lust

She smirks with delight
At every wife’s plight
When her husband can’t
get her out of his sight
Try as he might

She’s here to please
She’s every man’s squeeze
Touch her, if you want to please

Married, single, give it a try
For her all men apply

She’s a tart with a heart
from your money you need not part

You see, she can’t help but flirt
It fills her with mirth
She’s been like that since birth

If you want a fling
She’s a sure thing

You may think she’s a harlot
She just thinks she’s smart
She’s got what she wants down to an art

She’s a man-pleasing dresser
Women’s envy does not stress her

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Structured: Western
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Comments

is one that a lot of women deal with. You have plenty of good rhyming here, I think that if you paid a little more attention to rhythm, it would make it a really good work. Pattern and pace most usually make the best of partners with rhyme. ~ Geezer

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