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Mamas Waiting Hopefully

BUT THE DOC
Says
HE Wonders
HOW I AM Holding
TO This Earth
Since Long
SO Long

HOW Much More
HE CAN'T Guess
BUT Does Profess
Some DAY
IF NOT Today
I Shall
AS I Must
GO Away

LET THE DAY Come
ONE DAY
Some DAY
ANY DAY
When

HE CAN'T Play Magic
HE'S A DOC Only

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

yes, he's only a doctor, not a magician. I hope you will be with us here for a long time to come. sometimes the pain is so bad, I wish my time would come Now! your poem made me think. about the good days to come. thank you.

*hugs, Cat

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Don't think of tomorrow so many guys told mommy my life is limited to 13 some unknown power changed it to 83 I will add on another decade jobless guys never die they need penance so carry on follow the leader ahh me!

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this week shall post afresh
O GEE

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