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MAKE ME BLUSH....Romantic for a CHANGE

if only I was a bit younger
the hunger would have been
quenched
Lovers poetry

When love is in the air
who can but dare
not to blush
oh it’s all
a
hush, hush

make me blush
if only I was a bit younger
the hunger
would have been quenched
there wouldn't have been any danger
of being drenched.
but then that's a simple desire
an impossible conjecture
in which none of us
today can venture
so blushing alone
be your adventure

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This poem is as a consequence of a blushing remark by a fellow poet on my poem Oh Blush
Editing stage: 

Comments

you were capable of a blush! This is one of your better ones. I would have let the poem stand at the end of "so blushing alone be your adventure". The last few lines belong in the comments by the author. ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

and complied
hope now all will know
Lovedly can blush also
lol

author comment

a plush blush of a poem too ;)

thank u hope u also
blushed
at least once

author comment

Red as chilies

Hi Lovedly, I realy like this poem.
I want to place it on Instagram.
I shortened it to a few lines though.
May I place them on Instagram as this short version of yours, I will sign it "Lovedly"?
I can't post long poems there.

if only
I was a bit younger
the hunger
would have been quenched
so I am blushing alone

IRiz

Irene
Hope many more will blush with me
thanks you are supreme
Lovedly bows

author comment

Lovedly these are your supreme words.
Please say if this is okay to post them on Instagram like this. I will sign it with the name Lovedly. Is this okay?

IRiz

yeahh hurrayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

author comment

thank yyyyyyyyyyou kkkkinnnndlyyy

IRiz

Irene you like my poetry there is one I posted yesterday
you may scan when ever you can

it's all about seas shores life and ocean

author comment

i have been reading your stream all day, man
i just don't comment much
but don't think you are not in my thoughts

IRiz

I Walk as an Image

author comment

Yes I like it. I will comment on it later. Promise.

IRiz

I know your plate is
overflowing

author comment
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