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Machine Gun me!

You inspired
used to boost

now you with your mind set
you feel we all are roasted

You give me the insight of a writer's mind
where blind men can see more
than those with eyes

and the brain prompts me to be reborn ,
yes reborn
don't frown

as I am on my last leg
though still fairly sound ,

you are a young one
not fifty yet
many sons you have to still beget
maybe of verse
I can bet

and now I do confess
you give me a vision
I've missed all along
now tis very strong ....

I must go back to school
and become a drop out,
In America that's the biggest qualification
for miners and minters

for Neopoets I 'd love to be one

A philanthropic
S of a Gun!
maybe a Machine gun!
at least a
Loved one!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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you make me smile with this piece bro.


even if they do so all the while
reading my poetry
in their own style
so smile
alid jaaan
do smile!!!!!!


author comment

a Neopoet! Your command of the English-language becomes better all the time! [ I mean that as a compliment ]
I remember when you were a great deal more enigmatic [ simply because you didn't understand as much as you do now. That said, I think you should add a [ d ] to the end of the word [inspire]. Good job on making us smile! ~ Gee

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d now added
good suggestion
could be a typo too


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