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Macaroon

Now she is
Valentine mine.
By silver sail
to quiet slip,
in blue waters
warming dip.

The prophet knew
subtropical dew
is hidden within
the macaroon.

Venus,
sulfuric acid rain
forever remain
my awesome
planet insane.

Night light of Cameroon;
kiss me soon
touch me
with your reflection.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

I like the last stanza a lot
because it carries the most vivid and enticing image.

There is a typo in the first line of the last stanza.

IRiz

The pleasure is mine.

IRiz

Thank you,
Mark

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