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Lucky Stars

I thank my lucky stars

and
bless you for your good wishes .
When the time comes
let nature take its recourse
and
let's go back to the creator ,
without remorse .
Then let the docs gape
and faces may they make
what a fool,
didn't let them their dollars make .

but why delay
and
bear the pain
one day that final day
will come again

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Free verse
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Comments

... right? Neither of these poems are "riddles" as you call them. I think they are quite straight forward and amusing with a sense of reality. wesley

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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a real diamondic gem

loved

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