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Lucky boy friend

I recall seeing a gal
eyeing her boyfriend

he looked at her too
she waved come over
and there and then
right in the open
she jumped upon him
like a cat does on a lady

she clawed at him tightly
and they smooched
all could see

none bother in the west
as must be knowing ye

she pulled him closer
and went behind the trees
what must have happened next
is any body's guess

you are right
we all heard loud moans
the park was not empty
all clapped as they came from behind the trees
totally wet and blushing

under the waterfall perhaps
you had also similarly been
hopefully unmindful y unseen
lucky be thee

I've had no such experience
married very, very early
so be happy it was she

here many go
with gays

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Quite romantic Lovedly.Beautifully composed.

with ref your poem lucky boy poem
Creativity you like it
so do I and dude
u are n engineer
I a scientist

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Yes I am Lovedly.Good to know you are a scientist, that's really great.


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