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Low Life

Submitted by brittle light on Tue, 2010-12-07 09:28

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from the depths of microbia
arose man, and a world

from throngs of ignorance
was born a taught man

from the confusion of knowlege
was made a poet

from the muddiest of mud
grows a beautiful lotus

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Kailashana2

Tue, 2010-12-07 09:53

....each lotus petal unfolds as it must in its due time..

This is poetry that marries spirit to soul, heaven to earth.

Thank you.

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weirdelf

Sat, 2015-01-03 00:07

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