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[Love/Trust] Runic Symbols

T r u s t is the short cut to L o v e

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nice comparison of the two words love and trust you have made in this one liner...giving an underlying message that both compliment each other

do you think route would be a good replacement for cut?

I have a few alternatives

t r u s t is a stepping stone to l o v e

t r u s t opens the door to l o v e

t r u s t a doorway to l o v e
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raj (sublime_ocean)

All are good suggestions/alternatives raj, but I thought the use of "short cut" is a fresher use of the words, don't know if you agree with me

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I do agree Rula but what is causing me a kind of a bump is the word "cut"... i don't know if you agree but i believe that though trust is important for it to blossom into love it needs to survive the test of time so i believe it can be a means [route] and not an end in itself....to me short cut equates with haste...know what i mean?
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raj (sublime_ocean)

I see now what you mean. I think you need to read the "short cut" as a phrase to give the meaning that you suggested earlier which is "route". It has a totally different view than reading "short" alone and "cut" alone.
Got me now?

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Noted Rula
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raj (sublime_ocean)

hope you read more about the form. It's a great fun especially when you're limited with time.
Appreciate your thoughts and the comment.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Thank you for sparing me the time to explain. You are spot on dear in reading this mini liner :)

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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