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Love's Resolve

come with me through painted doors etched with good taste
along pillars of taunt memories through the silence of song
in moments filled with great granduer walk in the power of the rod
love has gained love also has lost humanities heaviest of cost

love is the very essence of my mere existence learn to shun each resistance
Robin's sing in the midst of Autumn or that in Spring
vibrant colors of lavish based decorum onto so much more
When two lovers come to meet no time for any hide & seek

from known brevity onto lasting longevity a tender memory
feelings of shelter to help cool down the soul
vibrations over temptation in common emancipation
love lingers on in a tender song

it speaks volumes so you can get along
carry yourself through every test
sweet solvent solution toward a rise of care
just to be fair need to pray hard

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Good feelings displayed here but they would be better absorbed if broken into stanzas. Each stanza break give the reader a chance to pause and consider what he/she just read..........stan

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