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Lovely Seeds Any Takers

A new seed
a new womb
a newer younger
smarter man
fresh sperm
sorry seed
from millions
and
another new mom is born
but why do you all
post a comment
then delete it
new breed of seed?
of post corona generation
lol

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Right off the bat... the all caps... big no no in my book. You're shouting your poetry at me! Not really polite in online reading forums etc.. Not sure I get what you're actually talking about. I just simply cannot follow the train of thoughts, that they really make enough sense. Well, that's me I need a spell out idea that follows smoothly to seem logical. Just my two cents. Social media is something, though isn't it? Text speak and other weird happenings in chats. Lol. I assume this is basically about social media comments.?

"The most technologically efficient machine that man has ever invented is the book." ~Northrup Frye

 

A new seed
a new womb
a newer younger
smarter man
fresh sperm
sorry seed
from millions
and
another new mom is born
another generation
lol

author comment

"but why do you all
post a comment
then delete it"
Your asinine writings are getting worse, but that is your problem. However, when you question my decision to delete a somewhat terse comment directed at another member of our community, now I have to consider that as being an act of deliberate meddling. Cease and desist!
JerryK

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I haven't read you
this however does not pertain to you
ever

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